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Old 03-13-2009, 10:46 AM
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I didn't write the poem, but did add it to the photo, and felt like sharing it here.
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"It was Heaven ~ Right Smack in the Middle of Hell"
Quote from Stephenie Meyer's "New Moon" which depicts how it felt for me to be hugging/kissing the man who I thought was the love of my life behind the wall and razor wire while visiting him in prison.
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Old 03-13-2009, 11:10 AM
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Looks lovely but can't read the poem!
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Old 03-13-2009, 11:48 AM
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Looks lovely but can't read the poem!
If you enlarge you should be able to see it, but here's what it says:

The Forgotten Victim

'That's her there! her hubby's inside!'
'How can she stand by him?' a neighbor cried!
'I'd throw away the lock and key!'
'That husband of hers should never be free!'

'That woman can do so much better than him!'
'I'd throw all his letters away in the bin!'
'Just what can he offer now he's locked away?'
'A complete waste of space!' she shouted that day.

'That's the one there! her boyfriend's inside!
'He's scum of the earth!' a neighbors implied!
'If I was her, well I'd meet someone else!
'Not wasting my life to be left on the shelf!

'That woman's been left to cope with the shame'
'It was all over the papers! and gave out his name'
'He's useless! A criminal! Bring back the rope!'
'He'll do it again! for him there's no hope!'

My comment:

That man you condemn has a child and a wife
A Mom and a Dad who has given him life!
What would you do if this happened to yours?
Deny all your love and close all the doors?

Do you honestly think I'd sink to a level
And just turn my back and deem him a devil?
Yes! He's done wrong and is serving his time
And No! I do not agree with his crime.

'That woman' you point at, yes it is me
I was born with a name, as I'm human you see!
I'm innocent! just incase you've forgot
And love him whether you like it or not!

I've had the abuse, the comments and more
It's nothing I haven't heard all before
I mean no offense when I say this to you
I'm a victim as well- A forgotten one too.
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"It was Heaven ~ Right Smack in the Middle of Hell"
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Old 03-13-2009, 11:54 AM
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Thanks loved it
i can't enlarge it lol i'm not that computer savvy
again thanks for sharing
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Old 03-17-2009, 08:54 AM
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just click on the picture it will enlarge, it is beatuiful, printed it off and framed it.
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Old 03-18-2009, 10:14 AM
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Do you know who wrote the poem?
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The poem reflects on the way i feel
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Old 04-16-2009, 01:26 AM
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I really like that one, being in the unique position im in i sometimes see the pain from the inside,but all to often we forget the ones left behind.BRAVO LOVED IT!
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