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Old 11-03-2003, 01:50 PM
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Default CLOSE by Carol Ann Duffy

I've just posted this in the Movies and Book reviews forum in response to a thread on favoruite books/poems and wondered if anyone here would also like to read it. Its pretty intense but I love it!

CLOSE by Carol Ann Duffy

Lock the door. In the dark journey of our night
two childhoods stand in the corner of the bedroom
watching the way we take each other to bits
to stare at our heart. I hear a story
told in sleep in a lost accent. You know the truth.

Undress. A suitcase crammed with secrets
bursts in the wardrobe at the foot of the bed.
Dress again. Undress. You have me like a drawing,
erased, coloured in, untitled, signed by your tongue.
The name of a country written in red on my palm,

Unreadable. I tell myself where I live now,
but you move in close till I shake, homeless,
further than that. A coin falls from the bedside table,
spinning its heads and tails. How the hell
can I win. How can I lose. Tell me again.

Love won't give in. It makes a hired room tremble
with the pity of bells, a cigarette smoke itself
next to a full glass of wine, time ache
into space, space, wants no more talk. Now
it has me where I want me, now you, you do.

Put out the light. Years stand outside on the street
looking up to an open window, black as our mouth
which utters its tuneless song. The ghosts of ourselves,
behind and before us, throng in a mirror, blind,
laughing and weeping. They know who we are.
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Old 11-03-2003, 02:07 PM
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I love this poem, I'm studying poetry for part of my degree and this is so moving.

Have you read Kahlil Gibran? his poems are really moving.
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