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Old 11-29-2020, 03:27 AM
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This poem was written by my penpal - if anyone has comments/feedback, I'll pass it on to him. He wrote it as a song with guitar chords


Outside my Window

your the bird that flutters
outside my window pane
my cool breeze of summer
chirping sweet melody of freedom and change

your the reason why
my hope survives
cause all my doubts dies
when i take a look outside
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