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Old 03-12-2020, 10:33 AM
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Default Poem: No replacin you

I write poems to vent how I feel. This helps in so many ways.





How I say this?

He's the only one.

Been there from day one, never questioned me- I was the world and he never questioned it.

And here you are, not sure what you're made of- your so weak!

What am I doin' these days?

I have the kinda love that didn't need introduction, it was a fact, sure thing.

You ain't it.

Need a ride and you can't help me- but I'm suppose to believe you need me.

Do I need you, that's the question?

You a disappointment to me- that's the truth!

And people get so confused, how could you want that?

Do you know what that feels like?

Do you know?- You have no clue.

This love is so real, so true, I'd take the time for him to spend time with my kids too.

I know we both would sacrifice- me and him! Truth.

But maybe that's not understandable to the public- but this shit ain't for viewers.

This for us, me and him, and the kids.

How I say this?

You don't got the heart. A lot of people missin' it

A lot of people, confused, mistake it

Want more, blind to what really makes you.

Like findin empty vessels- you afraid to break it.

I told my sis "If he was out id be all over it"- yeah, I meant it

All she could say "wow. gross" Yeahh, to you-right?

You don't get it.

Nah, that man is everything. No one understands it. No one gets it.

Met him, first week and I didn't have a home. Went hotel hopin', best 6 months of my life.

A broke celebrity but who needs money when you happy.

He was the glue- and I didn't even know then.

Couldn't even comprehend what this love was made of.

I love him and i'd do anything to vow my loyalty

Show every other man there are aint no replacin' him.
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Old 03-12-2020, 11:15 AM
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I write poems to vent how I feel. This helps in so many ways.





How I say this?

He's the only one.

Been there from day one, never questioned me- I was the world and he never questioned it.

And here you are, not sure what you're made of- your so weak!

What am I doin' these days?

I have the kinda love that didn't need introduction, it was a fact, sure thing.

You ain't it.

Need a ride and you can't help me- but I'm suppose to believe you need me.

Do I need you, that's the question?

You a disappointment to me- that's the truth!

And people get so confused, how could you want that?

Do you know what that feels like?

Do you know?- You have no clue.

This love is so real, so true, I'd take the time for him to spend time with my kids too.

I know we both would sacrifice- me and him! Truth.

But maybe that's not understandable to the public- but this shit ain't for viewers.

This for us, me and him, and the kids.

How I say this?

You don't got the heart. A lot of people missin' it

A lot of people, confused, mistake it

Want more, blind to what really makes you.

Like findin empty vessels- you afraid to break it.

I told my sis "If he was out id be all over it"- yeah, I meant it

All she could say "wow. gross" Yeahh, to you-right?

You don't get it.

Nah, that man is everything. No one understands it. No one gets it.

Met him, first week and I didn't have a home. Went hotel hopin', best 6 months of my life.

A broke celebrity but who needs money when you happy.

He was the glue- and I didn't even know then.

Couldn't even comprehend what this love was made of.

I love him and i'd do anything to vow my loyalty

Show every other man there are aint no replacin' him.

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Old 03-12-2020, 01:05 PM
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[quote=jmrogel1;7813094]I write poems to vent how I feel. This helps in so many ways.



Very touching, especially to people who are doing loved one's time like you are. Songs are poems set to music. I've sent a lot of them to my wife over time. One of our favorites:


"The Way We Were"
written by Marvin Hamlisch


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I write poems to vent how I feel. This helps in so many ways.



Very touching, especially to people who are doing loved one's time like you are. Songs are poems set to music. I've sent a lot of them to my wife over time. One of our favorites:


"The Way We Were"
written by Marvin Hamlisch


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I love this! So beautiful!
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"The Way We Were"
written by Marvin Hamlisch


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Sorry about the copywrite problem. Thanks for posting the link. It's far better!
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Old 03-13-2020, 08:47 AM
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Sorry about the copywrite problem. Thanks for posting the link. It's far better!

God this has me missing n loving on him so much more
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