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Old 01-20-2005, 01:30 PM
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Default No One Hears My Cries

Maybe I'm crying in the dark
Surrounded by thick black walls
Nowhere for me to try and walk
No one will hear my painful call

I know I've done much wrong
Sins I have dropped like bombs
Stop, please don't judge how long
I've kept on doing what's wrong

I lost not only what I loved
But also my self along the path
I walked the edge and was shoved
Now from god I will feel his wrath

I got no one to blame but me
In hell I know I will live eternally
Everyday this shadow follows me
This pain that won't let me be free

Will someone please here my cries
Please don't abandon a broken soul
For in the darkness this soul dies
Why will no one listen to my cries

I sit all alone, starring at those memories
Sharing my pain seems to be forbidden
I guess no one will help me get through this
So ill run in darkness and remain hidden

Please god where ever I go follow close behind
Today or tomorrow, I know I will loose my mind
Missing the signs for in the darkness I seem to be blind
Sitting here alone crying wondering why I was left behind

In my darkest hour I will see my life flash before my eyes
Then I will see a bright light or feel hell feeding me fright
Well one day we must all die the sooner the better why waste more life?


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I hope you all like my poem-this ones a deep one, so I hope you all will understand where its comming from.
Lemme know what u all think-thankx.
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Old 01-20-2005, 07:59 PM
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I really like that. i know exactly where your coming from. thanks for sharing that!
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Old 01-21-2005, 02:52 PM
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Thankyou for the feedback!
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Old 01-21-2005, 02:53 PM
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Great piece Moreno, thank you for posting.
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Old 01-21-2005, 02:55 PM
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That joint is deep.
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Old 01-21-2005, 03:47 PM
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Old 02-24-2005, 05:39 PM
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I felt that poem! Thanks for sharing!
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I loved that poem. Thank you for sharing. I think I will go back and read it again.
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Old 03-08-2005, 03:28 PM
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Very good piece with lots of emotion and depth into the emotion!


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Beautiful sweetie, I feel your pain. I wonder the same thing every day.
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