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amtheil
10-25-2007, 09:29 PM
Ok, I know this might be cheesy, but whatever... I cried my eyes out when I got this in the mail. The best part is my boyfriend wrote it!!

Dreams

Last night I had the most beautiful dream;
It was so real, or so it did seem.

I awoke from my dream and a visitor appeared;
It was you standing there, your eyes full of tears.

I pulled you so close and whispered, "Don't cry,
I will always love you, til the day that I die."

I held you and kissed the tears from your face;
the tears disappeared and a smile took their place.

We talked of tomorrow, our hopes and our dreams;
of working together and being a team.

We laughed and we talked all through the night;
everything was so perect, everything was so right.

Then suddenly I awoke, the sun on my face;
I found myself alone, back here in this place.

My dream was so real, I almost forgot;
it left me thinking, and this is what I thought...

If you believe in your dreams your certain to find
that dreams are a reality in your subconscious mind.

So don't every think we're apart forever,
for tonight when I dream, we will be together.

WOW!!!!

michael26
10-25-2007, 09:32 PM
omg that is the wsweetest! my man had told me he had a dream about me... he's always writing me sweet stuff, but i never get poems, damn, iu want one!jealous... (:

bzzz
10-25-2007, 11:50 PM
Oh honey that is so touching. What a guy!
I would have cried too. Your letter would have put me in the hospital heh

I got a tearful letter today., and all it said was I miss you and love you. :)

BabygirlNGary
10-26-2007, 12:11 AM
That was beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tyson's Wife
11-02-2007, 11:06 AM
That was far from cheesy or corny that was so freaking beautiful. Omg that one should go in the frame girl!!!

Christina48174
11-03-2007, 10:22 AM
OMG!!!!! That is so wonderful. Things like that make it all worth it :)

Forever_Lovers
11-04-2007, 04:56 PM
That was not cheesy at all. That was the most beautiful poem I have read in a very long time.

gapeachwifey
11-05-2007, 05:43 PM
I can relate to that one. That was beautiful.

HGL
11-09-2007, 01:07 PM
That was a very beautiful poem. You should frame it and put it over your bed, so that you can see it every night before you head to bed.