View Full Version : A Christmas Poem I wrote


Rachel
11-23-2006, 12:39 AM
This is all my own work so please feel free to use it if you want!! :)
It's a bit cheesy but I was trying to write something for a special Christmas card.

Rach xx



Merry Christmas, Darling!
Wish I were there with you,
to spend the holiday together.
Making magic, just we two.

Merry Christmas, Darling!
I hate to be alone.
I just wish that I could hold you
and have Christmas Eve at home.

Merry Christmas, Darling!
Though I'm far away,
I am thinking of you always
and miss you more each day.

So, Merry Christmas, Darling!
With these words I shall depart.
But I leave you with my gifts to you:
My love, My life, My heart.

Eternal Friend
11-23-2006, 12:51 AM
I think that is very nice. You did a good job. Thanks for sharing.

opalznsilver
11-23-2006, 01:49 AM
Absolutely Beautiful!!!!

I Love It!!!!

HuGzz 'N StUff
11-23-2006, 06:58 AM
Rach,
That is so sweet! You have my vote! Keep writing girl! BTW who is making the Spiked Egg Nog this year and passing it around??? I'm ready for one!!

Tracy xx

sharonno1
11-23-2006, 08:54 AM
ahh that was so beautiful it bought tears to my eyes thank you for sharing

cathy100
11-23-2006, 09:56 AM
thats very sweet im sure he wil love it, it is indeed beautiful!

shieldmaiden
11-23-2006, 10:01 AM
AAAaaaaaaaahhhh..................that is sooooo sweet Rach. Thanks for allowing everyone to use it. Its much appreciated.

Lorraine :)

Ness
11-23-2006, 12:36 PM
That is a really sweet poem Rach. Gee's you're a talented woman!! :)

Rachel
11-23-2006, 07:06 PM
Not only talented but gosh darned gorgeous as well!!
lol

Ness
11-24-2006, 03:33 PM
Oh I already knew that Rach!! :)
LOL

elsapunzi
11-25-2006, 04:21 AM
the poem was very meaningful as well as beautiful

mlynnm
11-28-2006, 08:15 PM
Very nice! :thumbsup:

opalznsilver
11-29-2006, 01:47 AM
Can I use it?

schatz
11-29-2006, 07:54 AM
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rachel
11-29-2006, 05:45 PM
Of course you can use it. lol
I wrote to see what I could come up with, it is not an exclusive thing!!

Hope he likes it!
Rach xx