So I have been out of school for ALONG time. Not to mention I always SUCKED at anything to do with English. So I am taking College Writing. :eek: I need to write a Thesis-Support Essay (5 Pages). I get to choose the subject.

So the problem is. I am thinking of doing a report about Alternative Treatments for Depression. I'm thinking Depression in itself is too broad of a subject. So heres the question (FINALLY)... Can I start the essay describing what depression actually is. So those reading it can fully understand what I am talking about. Assuming not everyone knows what depression is and what its all about. Then would I go into the Alternative Treatments. Or would I skip the part decribing Depression all together and ONLY talk about the Alternative treatments?

As you can tell from this post my grammar sucks too... God help me:cry: LoL

You've got to start with a basic explanation of depression - and if I were you I'd get hold of some of the CAT scans and MRIs of "normal" and depressed subjects - you'd be surprised how different they can be...and go from there! Good Luck.

Yes, you need to describe depression in the beginning because you cannot assume that your reader is knowledgable in the subject. In the first paragraph you can also mention the different types of depression (bi-polar, post-partum, etc.) which then will lead into your thesis statement about the altenate treatments. Each paragraph in the body of the essay could address each form of depression and its treatment. I hope this is a helpful suggestion!

Any good paper and/or thesis ALWAYS makes sure the audience knows what is being discussed so you are absolutely RIGHT ON wanting to begin with some explanation and definition. You may also want to include a basic explanation of what is typically *traditional* treatment as well.

You've got a great start!!!!

Jenn

Thanks everyone... I should of came here last week. Instead of reading and reading and trying to find the answer on my own.

I'll probably be over in the Grammar Police section in the next week or so. So you guys can help break down my paper (in a good way) and help with my grammar. Gotta learn all this over again and it sucks... Hopefully this time around I can get it right.

Thanks again.

The best test is to always walk away for a while and then come back or con someone else to read it aloud. It always helps to make sure that it flows well. If it can be read out loud, it can be read silently.

Now get to work! ;)

Jenn