Write A 350-700 Word Essay In Which You Clearly Identify The Issues Related To Your Chosen Hypothesis. State Your Position On The Issue And Give At Least One Good Reasons In Support Of Your Position.

I'm Not Very Good At This Kind Of Things I Have Tried To Write This:
Recidivist A Person Who Relaspe Into Crime. Many Of The Reasons That An Ex-offender May Relaspes Back Into Crime. One.homelessness Two. No Family Support Three. Cannot Find Employment. Four. Afraid To Re-entrer Into Society. With The Re-entry Program It Helps Ex-offenders. Housing,employment, And Support Is Offered. My Position Of This Program Has My Support Of 100%. The Re-entry Program Is Good For Serious And Volient Offenders. The Program Gives The Ex-offender Something To Look Forward To.

There Are Three Phases To The Re-entry Program. Which Helps The Ex-offender Not To Re-enter The Pen. The State Of Nebraska. Phase One Of The Re-entry Program Is Being Release To Omaha Correctional Center. Phase Two Is Work Release. Phase Three Is Parole.

I'm In Need Of Some Suggestions Of What Eles I Can Write And If Something Wrong Please Try To Correct It Thank -you

You might want to start by drawing up a "web" of your ideas, and then you can go from there....

I'll attach an example.

Basically, it sounds like she just wants a summary of what your hypothesis is... So an intro paragraph that says what your hypothesis is... and then a paragraph stating a few reasons why you believe it, then a paragraph giving more detail about one of the reasons, then a final paragraph re-stating your belief in your hypothesis.

Does that make sense???
Jenn

Here's an example of the idea web...

Jenn

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So My Start Is It Alright To Use?

the web idea is great! the ideas you already have are good too just expand on them. im sure youll do great!!!

Yeap, yeap. Your start looks good to me. :)

No worries about repaying me. We all need help sometimes. :)

Jenn

Jenn,
That is how we do things in my English class. It sure helps. All the papers I have done in the past year and a half have boggled my mind at times. Right now we are working on several small papers leading to our final which will be minimum of 12 pages. The webbing ideas helps break it all down as well as build it all up. School....what was I thinking? LOL

Patti

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